The feedback I have received has led me to make some changes; I have increased the density of the fog and slowed the flickering lights as they were flashing too fast for the audience to identify exactly movements and events. I have also received positive feedback about the scenery and the number of scares that I have included. Below is the updated version, however I still feel improvements can be made as I still intend to add the effects of thunder and lightening.
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